1.
What Went Well- very clever titles
- good music
- mise en scene rules!
- new voiceover
- colour when grown ups playing is off
- more time needed on Tilly Hawkins titles
2.
What Went Well
- voice over not strong enough
- nice shots - love the titles
- maybe something a bit better to signify those kids are older you
- music volume feels off
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